Raise Request Sequence for Performance Review

Here's a 3-message sequence for requesting a raise, designed for a performance review scenario, incorporating stealth ask techniques:

Assume CTA: Sales Director who increased revenue by 25%

Message 1 (Pre-Review - 27 Words):

"As I prepare for my review, reflecting on my contributions this past year, especially the 25% revenue increase, I'm keen to discuss my compensation and its alignment with my ongoing performance."

Message 2 (During Review - 12 Words):

"Given my performance and that Sales Directors at similar companies earn approximately $180,000, I'm seeking an increase."

Message 3 (Post Review - 6 Words):

"If not that, could we discuss additional equity?"